I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" .
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Some things I Like:

There are some cute ideas in this piece. I don't read much werewolf fiction, but there seems to be a freshness about some of the details as well. A werewolf who writes children's book? I can honestly say that is a new one for me.

Observations & Suggestions:

There doesn't seem to be much rhyme or reason to when the character tells us which things. That basically means that it doesn't feel like it progresses steadily as a story. Even a narrative character study can be a story.

I think it's interesting that we never learn the character's name as well.

The intro could be stronger. The first paragraph seemed to go on for a while, which was a nice contrast with the short "I am a werewolf" line. That much of it worked, but the first paragraph's content was not much of a hook.



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