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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Stargazer

This is a lovely, uplifting example of the Senryu form. I really like the way your carefully chosen words sound when this poem is read aloud. The alliteration with all the L's is particularly effective.

I like the sentiment of the poem -- love and learning are so important.

I found the last line a little abstract; not quite sure how it relates to the first two lines. This may just be a matter of my personal taste.

I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing your work.

Best wishes,
Mark


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