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Review of Haiku 0086  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Stargazer

This is a wonderful example of how much can be done with the limited words of the haiku. You paint a very vivid scene with your carefully chosen words here. I love the idea of a lake being thirsty. I also think the alliteration in the last line of this is a nice touch. This poem really put a smile on my face. Thanks for that.

Well deserving of five stars.


Best wishes,
Mark


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