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 On Forgiveness  [13+]
The surprising effect that visiting Aunt Sylvia's grave had on me
by CajunBoy
Review of On Forgiveness  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Shannon, the Editor of many Spiritual Newsletters,
Includes your piece in the pages of her 1-21-15 NL.
I often scan these NLs for reviewing fodder.

Emotionally this reader is hooked.
Your imagery is strong and the reader can but take the emotional ride with you.
I too have felt the specific leading of the Lord in one direction and then another, right at the time He wanted me to be there.
I too have experienced the healing of forgiveness. Your message will touch another, because you speak from a heart influenced by the Lord's presence.
Form and structure is efficient and it flows quite well.
Paced like a stroll through the emotional stratosphere, the reader marvels at the message and the grammatically pristine way you presented it in.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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