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 My Family   [E]
A family that is unified but not related
by Flowers
Review of My Family  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Greetings, Flowers ! Thank you for entering "My Family in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week!

*Reading* This is very sweet... *Smile*

*Thumbsupr* I especially liked theses lines:

When I try so very hard to finish the last pitch
One more inning, one more day
And when I am ready to fall to pieces
They pick me up and never let me stray


*Star* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Snow1* K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Snow1*


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