Review number # 2 of week 2/12-2/18

Hi Iron Law,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Pillow Whispers

First Impression: Beautiful images came to mind.

What I liked: Rummage sandy shores free for your soul, I love exploring new beaches, collecting shells and watching the waves break.

What needs your attention: Nothing!

Favorite Parts: Love songs drift over feathered wings, really made me smile. There is nothing more beautiful than listening to the birds in concert.

Overall Impression: A very nicely written poem with lovely images. I am glad I stumbled across it.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




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