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A piece is written with immense confusion of the feelings though it is about helplessness suffered in relationships
It's a plead for a cure of loneliness. but seems nobody answers, and loneliness increases to grief, so painful that its beyond help. The piece needs editing about punctuations and construction.
It will be better read after some editing,
Jaya H.


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