Hi, Ann I just read one of your poems.

What I like: I thoroughly enjoyed your poem.

We live in this world. One of the most beautiful planet in universe. But every year we have to face the natural disaster like cyclone, tornado, and hurricane. We rule our world but we cannot control natural disaster. This disaster causes more loss of life. In your poem you are telling about how Furious winds swept up everything. When the wind whirling around it sounds like roaring lion and that makes the children afraid.

My favorite line(s): “In a quiet place, before we face the end
Of life on yonder mountain.

In conclusion: beautiful and well written poem. It seems to me that this is your personal experience.

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