Well, I must say I was totally enthralled with this story. I do enjoy a good Historical fiction.
I loved the concept of the ghost telling his story and how his narration pulled the reader right into the scene. The reader can't help but love the character and care about him.
I felt the excitement, the fear, saw the sweat and tears, was a part of the grandness of their mission when the torpedo hit the ship's hull. It's all good, Dave! I love the ending!
I read this story twice, not just because I enjoyed it, but to see if I may have missed a spot that could use a little edit. Well, I must report, I didn't fine one.
Well done, action, adventure, historical and drama filled--you got it all here!
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