Review number #1 of week May 14-20th

Hi Midnight Wanderer

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: I Am

First Impression: I was curious how you addressed not using a transient state.

What I liked: I liked the eagle image, they are impressive to watch. The author created successfully consistent imagery in each couplet.

What needs your attention: One simple thought- the first couplet might be stronger if you find an alternative word to continue with the rhyme theme.

Favorite Parts: The rainbow after a storm, even at my age I love looking for the rainbow after a shower. The feeling of discovery never grows old.

Overall Impression: The couplets enhanced the flow of the poem, the imagery was balanced throughout to the reader's delight.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my Immense pleasure! Welcome to WDC!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .