RESURRECTION OF THE DEAD [13+] There shall be a resurrection of the dead |
Review number # 6 of week May 14-20th HiOld Warrior, My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive. Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing! Title: Resurrection of the Dead First Impression: The title caught my attention when I was looking over the group's contest entries. What I liked: I enjoyed reading about the different people with memories of past lives, interesting twist how each was from different areas and time frames. What needs your attention: Nothing, it rocks as is. Favorite Parts: The discussion of the food contents in the man's stomach and then when the author discussed how many people could possibly be resurrected. That's a staggering number to consider. We would face chaos, cultural shock and more battles or struggles over power. I was amused to discover Father Joe was not really a nice Catholic priest but instead Anubis with a mission. Overall Impression: Enjoyable read, the author did an excellent job of holding this readers attention. The Book of the Dead even the thought is revolting and compelling at once. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my IMMENSE pleasure! Lyn My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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