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RESURRECTION OF THE DEAD  [13+]
There shall be a resurrection of the dead
by Oldwarrior
Review by Lyn's a sly fox
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Review number # 6 of week May 14-20th

HiOld Warrior,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Resurrection of the Dead

First Impression: The title caught my attention when I was looking over the group's contest entries.

What I liked: I enjoyed reading about the different people with memories of past lives, interesting twist how each was from different areas and time frames.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it rocks as is.

Favorite Parts: The discussion of the food contents in the man's stomach and then when the author discussed how many people could possibly be resurrected. That's a staggering number to consider. We would face chaos, cultural shock and more battles or struggles over power. I was amused to discover Father Joe was not really a nice Catholic priest but instead Anubis with a mission.

Overall Impression: Enjoyable read, the author did an excellent job of holding this readers attention. The Book of the Dead even the thought is revolting and compelling at once. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my IMMENSE pleasure!
Lyn



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