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Hello runningwolf04,



I just read your poem "Invalid Item" , which I found when I hit the random review button.

Keep in mind that I'm merely basing my review off my own personal interpretation of your work and don't feel obligated to use any suggestions that may lie within. I consider myself a forever student and sometimes simply enjoy exploring new poetic devices I have learned when I notice them.

Hopefully you'll find this review helpful and encouraging!


*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Overall Impressions: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

A poem of true love crossing the lines of life and death. So romantic and sweet.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Conventions: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

free verse poem writing in quatrains with rhyming pattern of abab written in perfect 10 syllable lines. Instances of alliteration and consonance.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Suggestions: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

None.


*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Favorite Parts: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

I see you think you walk this Earth alone
For I am not right by your side it seems.
I may no longer be of flesh and bone
But I will always come to you in dreams.


The thought that our loved ones are with us even after they are gone is quite a comfort and romanticizes this poem even more after 50 years of marriage to think he's yet to leave her side.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*Additional Comments:*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

Lovely poem, thanks for sharing!

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*




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