Welcome to the WdC Josie.
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 6-16-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Has your dad passed away?
This is the question that arises.
If so; sorry for your loss.
If this is fiction, then you have created a real image.
That's the kind of writing that keeps the readers attention.
The uniformity of your stanzas, lends a smooth flow.
The locket evokes memories from many, as they were once a standard ornament worn on a chain around the neck.
The reader can see the locket opening; the memories bursting forth; and the memories fading as the locket is closed.
Prose that is poetry in motion.
All at a pace that is slow and rightly so.
With a crisp and clean slate as far as grammatically snafus.
You have a 10 right here.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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