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*Tulipp* Greetings, kedwards48! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp!

Prompt: Some folks like to Hi-Light their favorite lines in a book. Others are enraged by such a desecration. Write a story or poem about finding a used book full of yellow markings.

*Reading* You followed the prompt nicely. *Smile* Isn't it funny how we don't like to see highlighted text and yet we've done it ourselves? *Rolleyes* I love underlining and highlighting interesting facts in non-fiction books. Most of my nonfiction books deal with writing, so... *Facepalm*... yeah. *Laugh*

*Peno* You might consider your last line... that I marked up my copy and add a 'd to I... that I'd marked up my copy *Smile*

*Starfishp* Nice flow, good rhyming, easy to follow. *Bigsmile*

*Star* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Tulipp*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Tulipp*


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