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 The Last Morning  [E]
When love and friendship lives till its last breath, will it know that it's end has come?
by Naomi
Review of The Last Morning  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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The other character in this story is surprisingly a pet-dog was a well kept surprise at the end. The short story is simple and written with simple prose. It moves with the speed of everyday activity in life. The mention of a tear wasn't telling any reason behind it but may be separation mentioned in info above.

A good read,
Jaya H.


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