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Review of Martha's Journey  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Hand1*I saw that your story was entered in today's "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week"  and came to read. I often find great reading by perusing the daily contest. I was curious to see what you would do with it.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*Well, this certainly is creepy, but in an overt and direct sort of way. It gave me the chills that she fit the profile. I guess there are groups that really do target individuals like that and aren't as honest about it all.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I liked that she had a choice in the matter. That is the difference between a science fiction story and a horror story. I think this is definitely an engaging and cautionary tale.

The driver was pretty amusing and gregarious, wasn't he? Sounds like they come from a nice place.

Very imaginative take on the prompt! I didn't see any errors to point to or things to suggest.

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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am pretty much done with editing as I realize that more and more I do not enjoy doing that. I read and review and react to what I read on the page. So, this is not a detailed edit. It is a review, which is my reaction to the writing at hand, based on my own experiences. So, with that in mind, take the review for what it is worth - which is one ordinary soul's opinion. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it.

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Ta Ta until we meet again....

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