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 | Symphonic Silence  [E] A classic tale of love and the general hardships of awkward teens!  |
| (5.0)| Hi J. Miller   Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! It's been pleasure to review your "Symphonic Silence" on behalf of Simply Positive Group. Please be reminded that my review is based on one person's opinion and you have all rights to choose if you like it or not. So please feel free to use if you find something interesting or just ignore if you don't like something. Plot?This is wonderful little story full of metaphors and beautiful descriptions. I simply love the way you wrote it. I love your opening lines, they reminded me somehow on Journeys of Carrie Bradshaw from Sex and the City. I just have a feeling that she would write similar like you here. I could imagine myself in it, your sentences flows just naturally. Well done. Characters?I like the way you use full names of your characters. For example when Henry's foster mom entered her daughter's room and she was sleeping so she got upset. When she called her by her full name she really looked like that Barbie doll as you called her. I especially like the guy in cafeteria. His sentence: "Good morning, dude! What can I get for you this fine day?" makes him look like so relaxed and casual. He perfectly fit into this story. Mood?This is excellent for some teen roman or even short story for magazine. It has that tone. Overall impression?I really have no suggestions on this. To me it's great. Welcome to WdC and write on. All smiles.. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ~Minja~ "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP"  Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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