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 The Trouble With Listening  [E]
When I try to "just listen . . ."
by Dan Sturn
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Dan Sturn *Smile*

*BalloonR* HAPPY 15th WDC ANNIVERSAY! *BalloonR*
I'm Samberine Everose your little fairy friend and one of your fans here in WDC. *FairyL*.
and I'm here to give you a review as my *Giftr* to you on this awesome WDC Anniversary!.*ButterflyR*

I'm not expert in reviewing, please forgive me if I do some mess.

The TITLE-
While I'm flapping my tiny wings into your beautiful home-folio, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because-
*CheckR* its a poetry- I love poetry.
*CheckR* and have a captivating title, the word trouble and listening pulls my attention, the title have an interesting effect, made me eager to know, what's the trouble in listening, because I'm the person who always likes to listen.
Good job in hooking a reader. *Thumbsup*

The BODY-
I think you just reflect and stated there in your piece the way our thoughts went on while we listen.

I like how the words was written and how they was in their form, I can say that they are moving and not boring and this can make you think a lot of deep.
The given emotion is good also, that's the way we feel while we are listening,

Until next reviewing again, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

Regards,

Samberine Sig.
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