beautiful, though I would not want the fly to land on me at all.
I love your description. The poem flows like the world you describe. I was completely taken in. Reading the poem I feel more mellow, calm and I thank you for that.
I appreciate the footnote telling me of the style of poetry. I have never heard of this one. It works well with this prompt. Having read the other poets who wrote for this prompt, I have to say it is as lovely... though I would have liked some mention of the prompt... as reference, though not necessary.
Thank you for sharing your piece. It was enjoyable to read. Good luck in the contest. I am doing it too.

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