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 | Is Anybody There?  [E] The next time something goes bump in the night - are you really alone?  |
| (5.0)  Hi KimmieK! Thanks for sharing this spooky poem!   MY INITIAL THOUGHTSI really like this poem. It pertains to Halloween, and that is always a fun holiday! ● Character(s): There are no characters, just the narrator. ● Storyline/Plot: This poem speaks to me of things that go BUMP in the night, of shadows from the corner of our eye, of spooky thoughts that make you give yourself the willies...or something more, as you reveal at the end. ● Dialogue: N/A  MY FAVORITE PART(S):"When the moon rides high And the wind blows strong It's NOT your imagination Somebody IS there!" I know from experience - sometimes there really are things there!  SUGGESTIONS: None that I could find. Perfect spelling, punctuation and grammar. Great job!   IN CLOSING:  Thanks again for sharing this creepy poem. I'm sure your readers will enjoy it as much as I did. I think you're a very good writer, and I hope to read more from you soon. Keep up the good work, & Keep Writing!   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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