Greetings, brom21 ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" !

Prompt: Your piece (poem or story) must begin with the following phrase:

He reared, hooves piercing the sky...

Nice strong writing. I felt like this should be a chapter in a future book. I know of many readers who read this type of genre.

Great dialogue!

I especially liked:
Certainly you are an abomination. The very picture of you brings the epitome of dejection and ugliness.”

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


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