"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 

Hello there, Paul D
This is a Simply Positive Review!

I am also judging this item for "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thanks for entering!

Wow, I like the way you think, horror-wise, of course, as this story did indeed cover the goose-bump, flesh crawl, creep factor. I like that by the way!

You brought us a horror story that fit the occasion of the Halloween season.

I enjoyed the different chambers we the readers were treated into entering, and anticipating what ghostly apparition would appear and speak to the protagonist, next.

Good imagery!


Observation:

"It was[as] if his breath caused a vortex in the room, and the female ghost was sucked into his mouth."


Very well done and enjoyable creep-read!

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .