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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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It's a kid's thoughts about the disposal of his candy collection. Whatever his intentions were, not to distribute among the siblings, it was amusing to see that he offers the big popcorn ball to his mommy. The story moves well, between trick or treat event. It's typical single mom's story narrated through the kid's eye.
An interesting fiction,
Jaya H.



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