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 Celebrate The Dead  [E]
My Entry - we write for kids contest
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought COWntessa Beefaroni/hooves here to graze and read in your port?

*Cow*I was looking for recently written items and I enjoy Halloween very much so this caught my eye.

What Does hooves think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I like the fact that the writing is meant to introduce the little ones to the spookiness of the day and it is done gently and with a caring heart, warning them of the creepiness to be had.

Jumping out of bed to get the paper for the Dad is a very nice thing, too. It is clear that the writer loves Dad from the excitement in doing something nice for him. That is a very nice touch!

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I liked the description of the caterpillar wrapped up like a mummy in the spider's webb. That is something that is pretty memorable to me. Maybe that is what the spider has in mind to accomplish with all the work that goes into it.

I also liked the caution about the pups and such, to keep them inside and to watch where one steps. This is all good advice.

Nice work. Happy Thanksgiving!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. tHiNg, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

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I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am trying to encourage you to write more as that is my goal.

*Sun**Tulipp*


Ta Ta until we meet again....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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