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Review #4192975
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 Stepson Senses  [E]
How I feel having Stepparents.
by Jatog the Green
Review of Stepson Senses  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Snow3* Greetings, Jatog the Green ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp!

Shaara's Prompt: Getting a stepparent can be tough on a kid.
There’s a stranger in the house scenario,
plus the fact that any liking for this new person
could be interpreted as disloyalty to the biological parent.
Write about one very new relationship
between a stepfather/mother and stepchild.

Please, NO dark clouds due to impropriety
(stated with old-fashioned terminology,
but you know what I mean.)
Poem or story.

*Reading* Oh my goodness! Very intense. Great job!

*Snow1* I'm glad you added at the bottom that it was an acrostic (double). I almost missed that! Nice work. *Smile*

*Starb* I loved the line:
Enough anxiety to light a cave. I've never heard or read that before.

*Snow4* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Snow1*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Snow1*


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