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Hello Paul D This short poem is a wonderful example of a Cinquain that ably demonstrates how much can be conveyed in a few well-chosen words. I love the central image of the poem. It's uplifting and inspirational. It also reminded me of the title of a Metallica album, 'Ride The Lightening'. I like how you foreshadow the lightening with the word flashing. I was drawn to this poem by its title as I'm writing a novel that features angels. I was not disappointed and very much enjoyed this example of your work. Best wishes, Mark ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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