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 friends  [E]
watch who you hang around!!
by ArkMan
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Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC Arkman! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


*Smile* This seems like a positive view point about friends. I like the idea of detachment and that every friend, true or not, comes with a lesson all for our benefit in the long run. I got the idea that not worrying is vital to happiness in any case. *Wink* So true.

I enjoyed reading the free flow of ideas and it flowed in a unique way. Images like lane switching, snitching are interesting and vivid. You present the ebb and flow and quality of friends dramatically.

I wondered is the word "so" would make sense instead of the second "but" in the last line, though you could have a purpose...*Wink* Just thinking...as it seemed odd to me.

Thanks for sharing your vision and crafting. It was fun. *Starstruck*

Light on the path as you write on!

eyestar
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