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"Sometimes the love of writing
circles into a war, a battle within, pages
to number the time it takes
'Author beware,' the instructor said."

great poem!
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successes

1. limited satire

2. beautiful verses
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flaws

1. I feel this would've worked better as a satire poem

2. some verses feel unneeded, for example "it might just make a single move on the chessboard, winning"

3. not nearly enough subtlety
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good poem, but still needs some work overall...

3.5 stars