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 The Medical Examiner  []
Will the medical examiner finish in time?
by Tadpole1
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Rated: | (4.5)
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What brought hooves meandering over to your port?

*Cow* You visited me with a review earlier on, so here I am to read and send a review of one of your flash fiction stories!

What Does hooves think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I watch a show called Rizzoli and Isles - the fast paced banter reminded me of an episode of that. If you are not famliar it involves a female homicide detective and her best friend, Maura Isles, the female medical examiner. There is a lot of comedic back and forth with their relationship.

I liked the way the dialogue flowed so naturally.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*I think the fact that this is a mother/daughter relationship humanizes the medical examiner, who tends to be a somewhat foreboding figure by the nature of the work. You did a fine job with the prompts - it reads like it could be developed into a longer piece of work as I feel like I got to know the characters quite a bit more than the usual flash fiction effort.

Daughters are always impatient, especially with their mothers it seems.

Nicely crafted story!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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