Hello Miss ~Minja~ . Fancy seeing you here. I'm here to review your poem, "Invalid Item" , as part of iKïyå§ama 's Earth Day newsfeed challenge, "Note: ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Hel...". I hope this review finds you well. Thanks for sharing your work with us!

I love these poems that you can read forward and backward and have it still make sense. I've never written one myself because I think I'd probably suck at it with my weird line breaks and all that, but I think it's so cool when it works out. Your picture is private on this one too, so I can't see what your inspiration was that you included at the bottom of the poem.

I think the first one I read of these was "Lost Generation" by Jonathan Reed  . Have you read that one? Anyway, on to your poem...

There were some really good lines here, like: human eyes are blind in devastating times. It seems like there are a lot of human on Earth crimes in the world and it's easy to not realize it while we go about our daily lives. I also liked the part about treasuring God's gift and fulfilling His plan. You know I'm not religious, but I can still appreciate it for what it is. At the very least, the Earth was here before we were and we should appreciate/respect that.

The only part that lost me a little was the middle when reading it backward because the punctuation doesn't match with the question marks where questions aren't being asked. I thought the first five lines were awesome reading backward (and forward as well). Thanks for sharing your poem with us.







My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .