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 Only One Hour?  [18+]
It's hard to hear you are going to die. It is even harder when you are so young.
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Review of Only One Hour?  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This short story provides a very good character study of a young man who is about to die. I think that Randy might like his Doctor because he spends more time talking to her about how to tell his parents than he spends telling his parents.

It is sweet and sad that the majority of the hour is spent in a medical setting instead of somewhere nicer, but Randy is more concerned with the feelings of others than with his own wants and desires. I hate medical settings and the last place on earth I want to be is any doctor's office or hospital. But, I guess you have to see them to find out things because they never divulge much on the telephone.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*I think your short story is a good one and that you used the prompt to show a character that is very admirable and somewhat noble in the fact that he puts others before himself.

The ending was sad, but it all goes along with responding to the prompt. Very good story!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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