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Review of "Clear Shining"  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I wasn't exactly sure what you meant by clear shining but it seemed to fit quite nicely at the end of each line. Clear shining seemed to be the sky/sun then when I got to the bottom and saw the last line, I got it.

Over flowing rivers, sounds like where I live, especially at high tide. lol

I loved your last verse the best-wish I had a fireplace. The walks sound lovely. Smiling sunshine-yes!
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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