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Given: May 6, 2016 at 12:55am
Length: 835 Characters |
815 w/o WritingML
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 05-04-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
Personally, I just pray and ask the Lord's peace to fall fresh on me, and in faith I know He does because the anxiety is soon erased.
I like the way in which you present your meditative adventure. Your imagery throughout transports the reader to the different layers of consciousness and through it all the readers attention is maintained.
That's a sign of the good flow you have going on. So smooth and seamless. The transition from one part to the next is flawless.
The pace is slow and sensory captivating.
There is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's.
Thank you for sharing your journey in such a vivid way.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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