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 Sensory to Extrasensory Perception  [13+]
A poem, pentameter syllabic metering, depicts my method and experiences when meditating.
by Vaughan Jones - ONE Scribe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 05-04-16
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Personally, I just pray and ask the Lord's peace to fall fresh on me, and in faith I know He does because the anxiety is soon erased.
I like the way in which you present your meditative adventure. Your imagery throughout transports the reader to the different layers of consciousness and through it all the readers attention is maintained.
That's a sign of the good flow you have going on. So smooth and seamless. The transition from one part to the next is flawless.
The pace is slow and sensory captivating.
There is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's.
Thank you for sharing your journey in such a vivid way.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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