Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 05-04-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

The closing entry in this NL.
Interesting to say the least.
It's as if you are in possession of these magical weapons, but in reality they are buried until the day when they shall be reunited with the owners from centuries ago.
Albeit brief, your piece has powerful imagery.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is rapid.
The content is interesting.
There is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's and therefore no suggestions for improvement can possibly be considered.


Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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