I like the way you pose the question which becomes the theme for your poem. I think You need a question mark in the second line. I am not keen on repeated tasks either and yet the case for spring coming back makes this cycle cheerful.

I enjoyed reading the poem out loud for its fun soundscape and rhyme. The images are vibrant and I could imagine the "hungry critters". The idea of "snack" is cool. The enjambment "bunch" is well done for drama. I could imagine a lot of rain, snow and then the seasons too. It goes with both lines well.

I loved the warmth of the image of "mother's first touch"! Interesting contrast with the word "vicious" to describe the cycles. Wow!

Thanks for sharing your vision of spring. I enjoy spring aspects though spring cleaning is not so fun.

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