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Given: May 12, 2016 at 1:41am
Length: 508 Characters |
501 w/o WritingML
I'm afraid you totally confused me. You were supposed to describe a woman without using certain words. Instead you described the sea. You did that very well, I live near the ocean and rivers. However, describing the sea as you would a woman, doesn't quite match the title.
We use the word 'choppy'. I've never heard 'chippy' used this way.
You describe the sea and the weather near it very well. I really liked the singing whales and dancing dolphins. I loved that!
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