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 Counting my Blessings  [E]
Thoughts from today's adventure
by G. B. Williams
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello!G. B. Williams

I just read your piece "Counting my Blessings"  Yes excellent reminder to us. God made this beautiful world for us. Our family is the most precious gift of the god. But sadly we often forget to count our blessings to them. We don’t pay the respect that they deserves.

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I like this thoughtful piece. I enjoyed reading.


These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing. It's pleasure to know someone like you. *Smile*

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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