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| Hello there!  I am reviewing your story as a judge for the
Thanks for entering!  I can always count of Hoovsie sending a little chuckle whenever I read his bovine stories.  Quite amusing, entertaining and it fit into the fantasy prompt with no problem. Although I've gotten to think of Hooves as more real than "fantasy." I guess it's the many years I've been acquainted with him. Love this line and many of us writers and reviewers should take it to heart:"Write your own story and tell it the way that works best for you."  Fine message amid the fun. What could be more natural? Observations:  I liked the fast paced story, I always enjoy Hoovsie's tales and watch out for Hoovsie's tail.  I think Hooves could have had more "air-time" and I don't mean flatulently. A few more paragraphs with a bit more fun for the readers, pulling us along a little longer, is all that's missing. I didn't get my fill of Hooves.Otherwise ... Good job!  Until next time--write on! Good luck with the contest, and again, thanks for entering!  Regards, Web~Witch
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