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Moon's Naughty Kittens  [E]
Merlin, Star and Zebedee fly into trouble on Halloween...
by Brenpoet
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

Love a good Halloween witch spell!


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

It's a cute, fun poem good for kids to get into the Haloween spirit. I love the dialog in this poem. I don't see it used often in poetry and it adds and element of story telling that I really enjoyed! I would actually use this to teach my kids the art of rhyming poetry.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

A fun little kitten/witch story. It's not often kittens get to ride a witch's broom, I bet their adventure was fun while it lasted!


*StarStruck* Glows:

My favorite part was the verse about the kittens riding the broom. It provoked an image in my head that puts me in a Halloween spirit. I can seem them pouncing and up the broom goes! It's a great visual. The poem flowed beautifully and told a great story!



*Vine1* Grows:

I'd love to see more kitten adventures. Where else can they go to get into more of Nell's mischief? Certainly, there's other haunts that are quite a jaunt and more spooky delights of stories to tell.



*Dialog* Miscellaneous Comments:

I love Halloween. It's one of my favorite times of year. Kittens and witches of course go together like apple pie and ice cream.


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