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A Zephyr's Kiss  [E]
When we respect nature and nurture it, the gift is ours.
by Calli Seren
Review of A Zephyr's Kiss  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-13-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Wow, I got lost in this piece.
It's a love story right?
Or is it a fantasy from start to finish?
Inquiring minds want to know.
The form and structure are solid.
The flow is a smooth.
The pace is slow as the reader considers the words proceeding out of your heart.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafu's, therefore no suggestions for improvement are needed in this case.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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