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Review #4240070
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 A Miami Playboy  [13+]
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by linggy
Review of A Miami Playboy  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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PLOT -
Interesting perspective on the whole dating scene, from a male point of view. I liked how you spoke directly to the reader, giving insight and answers to question I'm assuming you've been asked plenty of times.

SETTING -
You had good descriptions of certain dates, and women that you've encountered along the way. Each one held a special charm for you. Each had their appeal, and that appeal spoke to you. It's not just about you hunting them, looking for a foreign woman. I think there is much more behind this.

CHARACTERS -
Your take on being single strays from the normal of what society deems acceptable. You walk to the beat of your own drummer, never a bad thing. Dating, and learning as you go is never a bad thing. Every experience gives you a greater perspective and leads you on your path.

THOUGHTS -
As a woman I was not offended by anything you had to say. Surprised? I think society had drilled it into our heads how things are supposed to go, and when they don't measure up, they make us think like we did wrong. What's worse? Divorce? Being with someone for all the wrong reasons? You were very clear in how you saw yourself, what you wanted, needed, and did not need. So many 20 somethings have no idea of where they are going and what they want. You have that, and if you choose to settle down one day, you will have a lot of life lessons to help you cope with whatever comes your way.
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