Title of Work: : My New Business (Other, Comedy)
Author of Work: : John Nation
Date: : July 19

Plot:
(author's statement)I've gone into business twice before and things did not work out. Got it right this time!

Scene/Setting:
A man decides to start a business. All of his college friends have one and most of them are doing great with their chosen business'. The first try is a Steak House. Business plan sound strong; no competition anywhere around, prime cuts of beaf seasoned and cooked to perfection. The doors are opened for business and the croud throws stones and burnes an effigy of the owner. Business location is New Delhi. Well that wasn't so smart.

Author does not give up. His second try is a shoe store. Again the business plan is sound; well made shoes at low prices. When he opens the doors no one comes in. He looks out and can't understand. Everyone outside is barefoot so they need shoes. Eventually he has to leave because he needs to eat. Business location is The Shrine.

The Author decides to stay in the United States of America and open a trusted franchise. Business plan in place he waits for the opening day. He invites all of his readers to the Grand opening of the newest Starbucks at Brigham University.

Characters:
Author

Suggestions:
I am laughing so hard at the moment, I am having trouble typing. You are defiantly a nut after my own heart. This piece is beyond funny and you have an excellent punch line to it. Congradulations!

Character Count: (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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