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| (4.5)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Just tired  PLOT - Interesting tale from both points of view, the dragons who willing want a human sacrifice, and the human who hates this tradition, knowing if they pick the wrong slip of paper their fate is sealed and life will end. Or will it? SETTING - Good moments as the dragon reached into the bowl with his blue claw. Also with the lottery drawing and how that red x meant sure death to whoever held it. The young girl chained the post as she awaited her fate was easy to picture in my mind. CHARACTERS - The young dragon who goes out to see what the day will bring, only to realize the young girl wouldn't make for a good meal. He instead is seeking friendship. The young girl who is terrified, ready to strike with her knife and fight to the death if necessary. GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE - She stood at the ready, a long knife in her hand. ~The dialog was believable. Only the one missing word stood out. THOUGHTS - I enjoyed this one, especially the ending. I hope you extend this story, expand where the young girl and dragon go from here. I could easily see a fast friendship ready to form between the pair. Now that would make for an wonderful sequel as they share different adventures together. Write on!   
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You responded to this review 07/19/2016 @ 5:54pm EDT