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Spring  [E]
Beautiful flowers in Gig Harbor, Washington-2007
by Sharon
Review of Spring  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello!Sharon

I just read your poem. I am now reviewing your poem on behalf of simply positive group.

The beautiful spring picture you painted here makes me reading this to the end. Each season comes different looks and beauty. In spring sprouted leaves smiles on the tree. The buds opened and the colorful flowers appearing. One could not help but be happy in such a joyful company of flowers. *FlowerB*

I like the lines
The tulip fields of colors bold,
red and pink, plum and gold
to herald spring, they now unfold.

In your poem all the things blended together makes a beautiful nature picture.
I like the rhyming scheme and the flow of this poem. I want to thank you for your sweet description.

Happy Writing!*Smile*

Mina  


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