This is a delightful, magical poem of love and romance. It has a very polished feel, flows wonderfully and is a pleasure to read. I like how it's the declaration of love that finally brings the narrator close to the object of his love. The title fits the poem well. I spotted no errors and feel this poem deserves a full five stars. On this evidence, I very much look forward to reading more of your work in the future!
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