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Review of Nature  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, OOT™ ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when this particular poem caught my attention. There were two main reasons why I wanted to know what kind of a poem you had here. I really like and enjoy reading nature poems and I never let any opportunity slide when I can read a nature poem. Since you didn't specify in the short description if this was about a specific aspect of nature, I automatically wanted to know what part of nature it was discussing. The second reason was the interesting short description as I wanted to know what you noted about nature and decided to write about it. During a walk, we notice so many different natural things like leaves, trees, saplings, animals, birds, insects. I wanted to know what you had here.

The flow of your poem was good ,there was no interruption and it flew out smoothly when I read it. The vocabulary you had used in your work was simple but effective in conveying relaxing, soothing emotions to the reader as she felt like a third person, your shadow walking behind and enjoying the nature around me as well. The first thing I noticed when I opened your work was the cover photo, such bright colours of a bird, very captivating! The beginning of your poem was good, it made the reader feel refreshed to have woken up in the early morning to the sound of the birds chirping. Just like what I had guessed from the short description, your poem was about noticing the different natural aspects during your walk. It was very relateable because I too when go on walks, I observe such things. Beautiful poem! The last stanza was my favourite!

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