I just couldn't get the rhythm or cadence of the verses. I counted the syllables to make sure it wasn't just me. Maybe it's a style I'm not used to?

It took me till the end to 'get it' lol At first I just couldn't figure out the thing that was having a 'rebirth' and pushing up out of the ground. The last verse got through to my brain.

Very interesting way to tell of the ghosts and the building. Thanks for sharing.

Love, LinnAnn