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 The Lab  [18+]
is not what it seems...
by Chris24
Review of The Lab  
Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.


*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]

I thought this was a pretty interesting story, especially with the back and forth banter between Marie and the Lieutenant. I thought the story itself was well written with the perfect use of the image prompt, and the descriptions really helps draw the reader in for a smooth seamless read. Well done!




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