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 freedom  [E]
Writing Prompt:Write a poem using these words: life, love and law
by she
Review of freedom  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Greetings, she


This is your local Simply Positive Reviewer, here! Your writing has been selected for review, as part of Simply Positive's mission to bring more light on Authors here at WDC!

First Impressions: "freedom"  is one of those prosey-type writings that gives me the impression that the writer is leaning out of their cocoon, opening their literary wings, declaring to the world that be about themselves....!!



Overall Impact: I liked the openmindedd this the work seems "trumpet" within the boundaries of the writing itself. I like the self-explanatory angel, the fearlessness, no tentative aspect at all.

It basically becomes a manisfesto for the readers themselves!



Errors: Did not spot any serious errors here with this work....



Summation: A good work of writing, a work of writinng that points out that a writer in this world is declaring for all who might stand up and take notice that someone with pen and paper and a heart willing to allow the world that a new force of creative writing is at hand!

And I like that...............a LOT!




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