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 Thunder Island  [18+]
Entry for Weekly Quickie, 5/10/08. Prompt-Desserted Island
by Purple Celebrates
Review of Thunder Island  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, Purple Celebrates


This is your local Simply Positive Reviewer, here! Your writing has been selected for review, as part of Simply Positive's mission to bring more light on Authors here at WDC!

First Impressions: "Thunder Island"  makes me realize ONE thing immediately - I will never look at bathing at the beach in the same way ever again!! *Blush*

My oh my.

Where to start?! *Laugh*

Let us put it this way; one cannot say that one was not warned! Indeed, as I went through this author's port, I thought perhaps I would check into the region where poetry would be in waiting, no doubt set to take me places poetic ... but I have had more than my fill of poetry no less, and wanted something a little different for my tastes this evening say.

Then I found THIS!!



Overall Impact: First, you must understand...I loveLoveLOVE meteorology. No, its not the study of meteors... its the study of weather! *Rolling*

Now, when I read the title, "Thunder Island", naturally I felt that here indeed was a good chance to read a decent bad weather story, with perhaps some incendiary romance thrown in to "enhance" the decor!! *Laugh*

Forget the thunder folks, just watch out....for the lightning!!!

ZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz-ISH BOOM!

Let me tell you, the author wastes NO time whatsoever getting to the matter of the whole proportional to the story (did that come out right?!?! LOL) - - - and no sooner had I arrived, boy....there wasn't a cloud in the sky! In fact...I wasn't even allowed to LOOK at the sky because...well....YOU'LL see!



Errors: I think there was one goof...not in the story but in the intro leading TO the story: the word "deserted" I think is the one the author is looking for!



Summation: Let us just say that every now and then, my need for drinking evening coffee is far less than what I normally would need around here! On top of all that, let us just say that this story was like trying to eat ice cream on a hot boardwalk with the temperature somewhere in the 100 degree range.

No matter how fast you might be able to eat and read...it still will melt in your hands. And no, I don't mean the M&Ms!! *Rolling*

KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!




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"Dr.J"


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